factory

A factory can be bad or good . They have a variety of good and bad qualities. A factory is good for buying something easily and increasing home value . But it is bad because of pollution, getting disease and for being noisy. But, overall I think building a factory.

First, a factory can be noisy. If it is near people houses, they are very noisy . So , people get stressed out. If children live there, they won't study much because it's noisy!! So, it is not good.

Second, a factory can expose people to many diseases. Factories can cause pollution. If one community has a factory , this community will have a lot of waste water. So, inhabitants dislike that and they can get diseases.
So, I think it is not good for many inhabitants.

Therefore, I think a factory is not good. First, it can be noisy and second, it can expose people to diseases. It causes many damage for people.

If I Could

There are a variety of subjects for students to study. There is biology, geology or something else. And there are common subjects. They are language, science, math, history and others. But I want to learn about art.
There are two reasons.
First, I like art. When I was young, I liked art very much. So, I draw a picture everyday. And then, when I was young, my hobby was drawing a picture.
Second, many people praise my picture. Recently, my teacher praised me when she saw my picture and she said " You have a natural ability for art. So I think 'Oh, I will study about art in the future.' At that time, I like art much.
Therefore, I think I want to study art. First, I like art and second, I was praised about art by many people. I hope that, even thought it is not possible, but many people learn about what they want to.







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Homework and Education

There are many kind of homework. Nowadays, many students have to attend on academy.
So, they must do their homework. If not, they get punish by their teachers.
Also, they have many good things if they did their homework. I think homework is necessary.
First, students can develop their ability. And, they can level up.
Doing homework alone is very important. For example, number one is doing with teacher but number two is doing myself. It is very different.
Second, students can grow from self study. If they develop that skill, they can always do things by them selves. Parents do not have any consequences for their children. So I think homework is necessary to children.
Therefore, I think homework is necessary. The reasons are they can level up and develop self study. I hope that students do their homework better.

What is people must learn skills??????

There are many important skills a person must learn. So, I think a person must obey that important skill. If not, the person does not have some manners.
I think real good person is obey manners.
First, people must not talk during eating time or a dinner time. If you do that, small food passed out of people's mouth. So, it can be moved other people.
So, this behavior is very rude in table manner.
Second, people should greet to old people. For example, the student meet grandmother. If the girl doesn't greet to grandmother, this behavior is very rude to one's elders. And greeting is very
important for people. Greeting is can happy to adults
Therefore, there are many important skills or manners. But two of these manners are in a meal time, person don't talk or greet adults. Nowadays, some people are rude.
So, I hope that people obey important manners.

Attending Classes or Not

There are many advantages and disadvantages of attending classes. But, to go to classes should be optional for students. If classes are optional, students may suffer. Therefore, many people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. However, I believe that it should be optional for students.
First, students also have to have free time. Students always study. So, they get tired. I think they should have free time, so they can rest even if its only for one day. If we are tired, we must rest. So, the same is true for university students .
Second, students have a lot of work. They might want to do anything except study. For example, they want to travel or do industrial arts for only one day. As for me I want to be by myself. I want to just do what I want to . So, I think that's a good idea.
Therefore, I believe that university students going to classes should be optional for students. For reasons are: first, students have claim and second, student might want to do another work. I hope that although students are not free, students will try hard.


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Museum

There are many people who visit museums.
Have you ever visited a museum?
If so, why did you visit it?
There are many reasons that people visit museums.
I sometimes visit museums with my family.
I think there are many good reasons people visit museums.
The first reason is many people want to know the culture in the world.
This is because they can know many countries' culture,,
and they can comprehend culture.
Some people might \think that only their country's culture
is important. But it is not only important to
know our culture but
also other's culture as well. It is good way to help society.
Second, many people want to know my country's history.
For example, Where are our ancester were or what did they use.
If people know our history, they can conveniently do something.
For studnets, they learned about history in elementary
or middle school. At that time, they might understand early and easily.
Therefore, many people visit museum.
The reasons are: first, to help society and second,
knowing history is so convenient to do something.
If someone visited there, there are many relics.
I hope that many people
visit there and find good things for their life.

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there are two ways of going knowledge. They are knowledge gained from experience and books. Knowledge from experience makes understanding easy. And knowledge from books helps describe details. While knowledge ganed from experience and books is very defficult , I think knowledge from experiend is is more important.
First, knowledge from experience can make understanding easy and remember for a long time. For example, in a natural science class, if a teacher only explains science , we won't understand this science principle, so we can't understand easily, But if we do experimentation, we understand easily.
Second, knowledge from experience can make people remember for a long time.
For example, if people become acquainted knowledge times. But people take a direct experience, they remember for a long time. So I think becaminy acquainted is not as important as remembering. In cinclusion, I think knowledge from experience is more important than books.
Therefore, I think knowledge from experience is more impertant than knowledge from books. Yhe reasons are first, about understaning and second, about remembering. I hope that many people heard about knowledge agained from experience.



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Because Parents are important for children, parents
bear children and they take care of children. Sometimes
they teach their children. So children are grateful for their
parents. If children don't have parents, their lives would be very difficult. And they would need other people to take care of them. I agree.
First, parents bear children so when children were babies, they saw their parents everyday and talked with parents, too. Additionally, parents teach their children and children learned from their parents. So they learn to talk to their parents.
Second, parents' teaching is more familiar than teacher's teaching because children know their parents well. So, children hear out easy. Sometimes, children learn to talk or something learn from teacher, they learned from parents so, I think parents are best teachers for their children.
Therefore, in my opinion, parents are the best teachers for their children. Of course some people disagree with this idea. At any rate, I hope that many children learn much from their parents. And many parents teach their children well.

Because Parents are important for children, parents bear children and they take care of children. Sometimes they teach their children. So children are grateful for theirparents. If children don't have parents, their lives would be very difficult. And they would need other people to take care of them. I agree.First, parents bear children so when children were babies, they saw their parents everyday and talked with parents, too. Additionally, parents teach their children and children learned from their parents. So they learn to talk to their parents.Second, parents' teaching is more familiar than teacher's teaching because children know their parents well. So, children hear out easy. Sometimes, children learn to talk or something learn from teacher, they learned from parents so, I think parents are best teachers for their children.Therefore, in my opinion, parents are the best teachers for their children. Of course some people disagree with this idea. At any rate, I hope that many children learn much from their parents. And many parents teach their children well.

topic: people attend college or university for many difference reasons(for example new experience ,career preparation increased knowledge)

This topic is about how attend college or university for many difference reasons. To go college or university is not very easy.
Nowadays many people want to go there for a variety of reasons. However I would like to talk about two of them. They are career preparation and wanting to study more.
First, people want career preparation. For example, if you want to be a doctor, you must attend university. If you don't have a diploma, you don't become a doctor. For example i want to be a teacher or a doctor, but i don't study very well. So I'm worried about my future.In the world, many people want to go there, but it is not easy.
Second, people want to study more. They don't study much so they want to study more. For example my cousin's sister, Su-mi. Now she has graduated from university. Naturally, she doesn't study much so she wants to study more. She entered university. When someone enters college and university, to study more. They can study more in college or university. So, many people want to go there.
In summary, this topic reasons are first, career preparation and second, want to study more. Therefore, most people want to attend college or university for their own differeny reasons. Whatever the reasons, I hope that people enter for their benefit.